Anonymous (unregistered) wrote on 09/16/2010 - 11:08.
unregistered wrote:
Copy editor:
One doesn't "swim" in a craze (see middle paragraph). The metaphor, as presented, is awkward and doesn't work. Anyone awake there? Perhaps try "That little camera opened the flood gates of this whole photo/video stream that we’re swimming in today."
Really? A hands-on look at a camera that's not yet available, and that's what you take away from it? Sometimes I wonder about people. Or perhaps I should say, "Sometimes I wonder about the people swimming around in this crazy stream of a world that we live in."
09/16/2010 - 11:08.
Copy editor:
One doesn't "swim" in a craze (see middle paragraph). The metaphor, as presented, is awkward and doesn't work. Anyone awake there? Perhaps try "That little camera opened the flood gates of this whole photo/video stream that we’re swimming in today."
Really? A hands-on look at a camera that's not yet available, and that's what you take away from it? Sometimes I wonder about people. Or perhaps I should say, "Sometimes I wonder about the people swimming around in this crazy stream of a world that we live in."